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Hi Mac, It's Miriam from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I really liked how you added in some other things than what people were expecting. I liked how you made the penguins evil. I never thought that penguins could turn bad. Have you ever been to Egypt? It is supposed to be really dangerous there. 200km per hour is fast! I really enjoyed your Quick Writes but next time you could explain what Quick Writes are. Miriam
I enjoyed reading these quick writes - you have used lots of strong verbs to build tension in your writing. Remember next time to highlight the sentence starter you were given so that your audience can see where your writing starts. I look forward to reading more of your quickwrites Mac! Thanks
Hi Mac, It's Miriam from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you added in some other things than what people were expecting. I liked how you made the penguins evil. I never thought that penguins could turn bad. Have you ever been to Egypt? It is supposed to be really dangerous there. 200km per hour is fast! I really enjoyed your Quick Writes but next time you could explain what Quick Writes are.
Miriam
I enjoyed reading these quick writes - you have used lots of strong verbs to build tension in your writing. Remember next time to highlight the sentence starter you were given so that your audience can see where your writing starts. I look forward to reading more of your quickwrites Mac! Thanks
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