Friday, 7 June 2019

Quick write The girl and the cat

I was gazing out the window of my jar, suddenly my huge owner the cat!!! Came back to feed me, he puts the food into the jar to feed me. Me and the cat are best friends, and I wish I could go out there and play with him. We are still friends even though he is big and scary. In fact he looks like he is going to bite my head off right now. So I quickly called out his name tiger tiger it’s me your friend. Then he gets all smoochy and smoochs the glass.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Mac

    I am absolutely love your writing Mac,I like the way you made your the cat your owner and not you being the owner of a cat I think it's really cute when the cat was smooching the jar. Next time maybe explain how the girl got in the jar.

    Kind regards,Maddie

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